Topic: Half Moon
Lilypetal's photo
Fri 08/28/09 07:21 PM
Half Moon

Half a moon, half full
If I had half a care
I'd think of you and your
half spun memories

Instead I turn
Toward the stars
only half as bright
as yesterday

I watch and stare
as one half dead star
streaks half way across
the midnight sky

I make half a wish
if the whole came true
this half a life
would be something new

I turn and walk half way
down the lonely beach
I have half a mind
to walk to the end

But half way through
I sit and stare
with half a heart
at the half full moon

And I wonder where the other half might be.

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 08/28/09 08:06 PM

Half Moon

Half a moon, half full
If I had half a care
I'd think of you and your
half spun memories

Instead I turn
Toward the stars
only half as bright
as yesterday

I watch and stare
as one half dead star
streaks half way across
the midnight sky

I make half a wish
if the whole came true
this half a life
would be something new

I turn and walk half way
down the lonely beach
I have half a mind
to walk to the end

But half way through
I sit and stare
with half a heart
at the half full moon

And I wonder where the other half might be.
biggrin amazingflowers

Lilypetal's photo
Sat 08/29/09 04:34 AM
Thank you Mirror!

no photo
Sat 08/29/09 05:40 AM
Just lovely, I really like this flowerforyou flowerforyou

Lilypetal's photo
Sat 08/29/09 06:28 AM
Thanks so much PKD. I took my evening walk, looked up at the moon and the words just popped into my mind with a simple little melody. I had to cut my walk short so I could write it down.

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 08/29/09 06:30 AM
Beautiful!!

Your moon tells such a story:heart:

AngelLight's photo
Sat 08/29/09 12:12 PM
Lovely flowers

Ladylid2012's photo
Sat 08/29/09 12:21 PM
Very nice Lily flowers

Lilypetal's photo
Sat 08/29/09 01:06 PM
I'm glad you all enjoyed my work. Thank you for the kind words.