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Topic: ~as
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 09/08/09 08:54 AM
as he leaves her he teases her with a kiss at the edge of her mouth later kid he tells her teasingbrunette

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 09/08/09 08:58 AM
Wow Double wow!! Do you know us?? Triple wow!

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Tue 09/08/09 09:01 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 09/08/09 09:54 AM
Very well done --- Yeah, nice tease!!!!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 09/08/09 10:45 AM
Enjoyed the nuance and cadence

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 09/08/09 02:45 PM
Short, sweet, tease...

kalunda Joined Fri 06/19/09 Posts: 284	Tue 09/08/09 06:55 PM
mmmmmmm

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 09/08/09 06:59 PM
I agree!! So few words And I felt that kiss And heard him say that!!! Again. BRAVO!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 09/08/09 07:18 PM
thank yous.

Sandcrab Joined Fri 10/24/08 Posts: 1392	Sat 10/10/09 05:27 PM
Way to cool. And you used my line," later kid".

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