Topic: --- Sunrise ---
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Sun 12/25/11 05:47 AM
It's been a long, dark, weary night
Waiting for the dawn
Hoping for the sunrise of my heart
The moon and stars taunt me tonight
I faintly remember what day was like
I fall asleep and wake
She hasn't come
I fall asleep and wake again
That's when the doubt came creeping in

In dreams I pass the time
Sometimes I'd rather stay there
For there we embrace the warmth and light
I wish I had this lonely night

I know, I hope
Someday you'll rise again
We'll make this day never end
Lets make this our last sunset

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Sun 12/25/11 10:23 AM
drinker Nice thoughts to ease the darkness..

HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Sun 12/25/11 02:45 PM
Edited by HawaiiMusikMan on Sun 12/25/11 02:46 PM

drinker Nice thoughts to ease the darkness..


Thanks man. My intent was more longing for love than depression. That would have been a better title


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Sun 12/25/11 03:37 PM
Sometimes,,,longing for what WE INVISION,,turns out to be OUR nightmares instead,,,so longing,,,surpasses,,living in hell,,lol
YOUR words pass on to us their meanings we feel inside,,and for that.
WORDS,,make their authur......drinker :wink: :smile:
Have a GREAT night and a safe New Years..drinker

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Sun 12/25/11 05:31 PM
Edited by HawaiiMusikMan on Sun 12/25/11 05:32 PM

Sometimes,,,longing for what WE INVISION,,turns out to be OUR nightmares instead,,,so longing,,,surpasses,,living in hell,,lol
YOUR words pass on to us their meanings we feel inside,,and for that.
WORDS,,make their authur......drinker :wink: :smile:
Have a GREAT night and a safe New Years..drinker


I think that most of us long for TRUE love. The nightmare of being with the wrong person is what has brought this darkness about. I too would rather be lonely than in that predicament. The end of my poem was about til death do us part. Hope this new year brings you great blessings as well. To a better future


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Mon 12/26/11 09:35 AM
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