Topic: Choices
Ruth34611's photo
Tue 04/03/12 11:27 AM
The fall was so fast and unexpected
A storm not anticipated to be.
Like a dive off the steep and jagged cliff
Hoping the waters below would catch her.

She had heard the call from a mile below
The sweet gentle sound of the open sea.
Without thinking twice her heart took the leap
Not that it could have been turned from it's path.

There was a time she thought it was her choice
Continue or walk away from the edge.
Fate and destiny were words for the weak
And those who give up control of their lives.

But when the cold waves crash into the shore
Sometimes they reach farther than expected.
It wasn't her choice to be swept away
Unable to fight the pull of the sea.

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Tue 04/03/12 11:30 AM
drinker flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

ShannonMarie21's photo
Tue 04/03/12 11:39 AM
That was fantastic!! Wow. flowerforyou

Sneaksintoyourheart's photo
Tue 04/03/12 12:35 PM
(((((((((((Ruth)))))))) ya amaze me i didn't know you had a way with words flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

jemare's photo
Tue 04/03/12 12:38 PM
I really enjoyed this one. Great visuals with the word play too flowerforyou

Ruth34611's photo
Tue 04/03/12 01:50 PM
Thank you. :heart:

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Tue 04/03/12 02:28 PM
just lovely Ruth flowerforyou flowerforyou

pennyg281's photo
Wed 04/04/12 06:35 AM
Wonderful writeflowerforyou