Topic: Fate is a tormentor.
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Sat 09/15/12 10:03 AM
Why must fate be so cruel a
master?
Does he enjoy tormenting the
hearts of men and women?
How can this feeling be?
Such a powerful aroma
of passion, love, and destruction. How
can it be... So simple, and yet a trial of
unimaginable turmoil... Why must fate
put us to the test...
I fear for my heart, as the shattered pieces are like sand
dripping down my chest. I fear, for
nothing.
Is this just a temporary fixation
of grief? Will my heart be kindled by the
furnaces of time? How can one know...
Only the hourglass of the devil will tell.

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Sat 09/15/12 10:30 AM
Love the texture Jonahflowerforyou Welcome!!!happy

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Sat 09/15/12 10:34 AM
All we do is blame the devil
whereas in us lies all evil
fate is nothing but a mystery
and tomorrow we will be nothing but history just do deeds and in your memory keep bcpz
as you sow so shall you reap

heehe this is what i came up with in few mins after reading your poem :) and keep writing the way u play with words is astounding

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Sat 09/15/12 10:54 AM
Awesome write....:angel: brokenheart devil

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Sat 09/15/12 03:53 PM
Those are wonderful words and so complimentary to this, and it is so true. We are our own worst enemies.

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Sat 09/15/12 03:54 PM
Again, thank you leigh! :)

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Sat 09/15/12 05:58 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sat 09/15/12 08:55 PM
Looking forward to read another of your writing soon :)