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Topic: Where i really want to kiss you?
akai_boi Joined Mon 01/17/11 Posts: 134	Mon 10/29/12 07:15 PM
boy : do you know where i really want to kiss you ? girl : on the lips ? boy : no ! girl : on my cheeks ? boy : probably not ! girl : on my neck ? boy: never ! to be honest i really want to kiss you in . . . . the church right in front of all people we know after we BOTH say , ' i do ' ♥

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Mon 10/29/12 08:29 PM
K Mildly romantic but lacks inspiration... But I could see this as a lead in to a song...

akai_boi Joined Mon 01/17/11 Posts: 134	Mon 10/29/12 09:32 PM
why dont you let the ladies give the feedback

SimplicityAtItsBest Joined Mon 09/10/12 Posts: 960	Mon 10/29/12 10:12 PM
It's cute

Angelsplay2 Joined Mon 10/29/12 Posts: 1	Mon 10/29/12 11:11 PM
only if you write songs

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Tue 10/30/12 12:18 PM
only if you write songs CHA! HA HA HA HA!!!! The ladies have spoken! Just offering constructive critique! Ain't nothing but trying to help a brother get a leg up. Wasn't nothang... Shooo.....

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