Topic: I Loved You Then, I Love you Now
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Fri 11/23/12 11:43 AM
When I was younger
I rode Bikes
and stole bikes...
Sometimes I stole whole nights
staring at the sky under broke street lights.
I remember those nights,
scared to death, but cold as ice,
Hard as a rock
yet,
my thoughts were not right.
Ignored my parents and broke the rules,
My fathers fist chose the spot,
my body chose the bruise.
Fist Fights & Penny Candy
Bullies & Hi-C's
Notebooks & Pencil Pop
Honest Teachers & Crooked Cops
All wrapped up together with a bowl of Fruit Loops and
Saturday Morning Cartoons.
Chuck E. Cheese Pizza
Bloody Noses & Balloons
We were all Dogs, Snakes,
Rats & Buffoons.
Monday morning comes, Textbooks were consumed.
The ugly ones got it the worst,
The cute ones had it the best!
Troops, Nikes, Converse & Filas
Guess Jeans, Cross Colors, Tommy Hill & Adidas.
I'd give my life to get all of it back,
just one more chance to keep it all on one track.
I wish you could've been there to see me shine, see my smile, feel my pride.
But you have been there to see these things & I'd give it all back just to keep you here...
With me.

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Fri 11/23/12 11:46 AM
Another cool write Sevin..

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Fri 11/23/12 12:09 PM
Edited by sevin30 on Fri 11/23/12 12:09 PM
Thank you much XD

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Fri 11/23/12 12:37 PM
Nice flow....smokin

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Fri 11/23/12 12:48 PM
So good, so good!...I smiled the whole way through ...Guess jeans, Nike, Fila, and Hilfiger!:heart:

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Sun 11/25/12 02:54 AM
WOW! I really like the way you relay your life experience and regret in this piece. Your work is inspiring..