if you steal my guitar
just write me a song
and i'll sing along in whatever key
you're not coming back
but at least know that
i'm your greatest act of thievery

when you close my dreams
to open my eyes
don't leave me with suspense or surprise
that the twist at the end
of your kiss is a knife
and paradise has sorrow
trapped in its seams

when you break the glass
with your slender hands
and my bags are packed but i don't understand
when you take off the leash
to set me free
you leave two lonely equally

This is too good.

This is way good..

I wish I had written this one. It's one of "those" kind of poems.
the whole beginning is perfect. An I really like these lines..
"that the twist at the end
of your kiss is a knife"

What an extremely clever way with words here.. plastic_pancakes... perhaps freedom is what will show you both what it is you need to keep dreams alive.. just my take…

Great write pp!...i had to read thrice to get my fill...it's that good!...thank you for sharing...

Love this......................side of you

Awesome write P.P.