For Gifted and bright we elevate are minds in a sunny twilight where everything is right we meditate are thoughts to the love of a positive moment maybe to some just a notion to us its a golden lifestyle where we fly as free as a dove hovering high above the broken dust and grey clouds of lies and lust we open are mouth we flap our wings we sing and roar to mighty tune of lions courage we know and controll are thoughts and ways we are one with god living here today forever saved the reborn mighty hes are strenght are temple so have no fear for we conquered the raven under the clouds clawed him into the dust with his screeches of hell that did not make us tremble we are made to lead men of courage mighty and humble under the wisdom tree on the branch with holy white feathers and beak we sleep till god wakes us in the morning to lift us in his hands to soar where very few have flown over the mountains leaping the rivers and seas we are forever in love and we show the cloud of love in are eyes are thoughts radiate in passion who we are as worn on are sleeves of the true strenght that can only be gained by those who have faith and belive the comfort so warm without a doubt without a fail without a shake of fear for we arent cold we burn inside with his holy flame wicked beware hes our king and we dont tremble as you do the mighty weak!!!

As much as I tried to read this, I couldn't c/o grammar, sentencing etc..Otherwise I am sure it would be a cool write...

I'm with Ainjel on this one... I tried twice to read it...

I'm with Ainjel on this one... I tried twice to read it...

Very nice... difficult to see what side of the fence you're on though, (too?).
I enjoyed the inference that the Gifted and bright aren't... at least not always.
:Trusting that the grammer and sentencing was a vehicle for that thought:

Hope to see more...

I feel the same Ted It is nice write...The voice of an angel perhaps?...

For gifted and bright we elevate our minds in a sunny twilight where everything is right...We mediate our thoughts to the love of a positive moment...Maybe to some just a notion, but to us it's a golden lifestyle where we fly as free as a dove hovering high above the broken dust and grey clouds of lies and lust...We open our mouth, we flap our wings, we sing and roar to the mighty tune of the lion's courage...We know and control our thoughts and ways...We are one with God, living here today forever saved, the reborn mighty!... He is our strength, our temple, so have no fear for we conquered the raven under the clouds; clawed him into dust with his screeches of hell that did not make us tremble...We are made to lead men of courage, mighty and humble under the wisdom tree on the branch with holy white feathers and beak...We sleep till God wakes us in the morning to lift us in his hands, to soar where very few have flown over the mountains, leaping the rivers and seas...We are forever in love and we show the cloud of love in our eyes...Our thoughts radiate in passion who we are as worn on our sleeves of the true strength that can only be gained by those who have faith and believe the comfort so warm without a doubt, without a fail, without a shake of fear for we aren't cold, we burn inside with his holy flame...Wicked beware!...He is our king and we don't tremble as you the mighty weak do!!!


I hope this does it justice....

jeeezzz, this is absolutely beautiful! wizzo... It actually flows thru my soul and with each following sentence the shivers grew stronger and even stronger straight thru to the end... again, this work, once readable, is awesome!

Thank you, Leigh, for taking the time to help us see...