im rebellious
im in my bed
ive made choices
that require me
to make more choices
i gave up security
so its said
i say
did i have it
if i didnt feel it
im rebellious
im my own inception
i wont always
show on this paper
im rebellious
while i live
my dreams intact
for the rest
i'll imagine,with you
im rebellious
im not waiting to love
i am love
im not waiting for love
i give love
im not waiting to love
i am love

i like it .

Excellent, TB...

im not waiting to love
i am love
im not waiting for love
i give love

I'm rebellious too..
This I have in common with you...

Love the rebellion...♥

I believe it... that you're rebel and that you're not about to show your hand on paper.
I would hope for a full-scale rebellion of love and peace of this nature, breakout across the world.
Not trying to love... but being love.
GL with that.

Still, what's security? Maslow makes a lot of sense... but doesn't cover every aspect of life.

I think that security isn't what you feel... it's what you trust about yerself.
Know that you know, what you know.
I think that you know a lot.

Simplistic excellence!

Sometimes more is not better.

It can often confuse a simple clarity!

Aye, guilty, me! haha.
Digging deep into someone that I'd like to know better distracted me.

My comment was on the piece itself, by no means directed elsewhere.

Never apologize for words from within... no matter where your thoughts may be dwelling

TY... haha.
But just to be clear.... my thoughts are are dwelling on a friendship that I hope to grow.
That part, I may have confused with the "piece" itself...
Your clarity reminded me of what we're here for.

You folks write... I offer comments of me or whatever.
I want it to remain so.

Most all of you have my respect in crafting your magics...
TB just happens to rock my thinking... kindred souls perhaps.

tazzops..
AnonymousKing...thankyou
AthenaRose2...thankyou.kindly
Ainjel...pleased you keep reading!
oldhippie1952...
Teditis...security..overrated...i prefer genuine,passion.
Sojourning_Soul...i agree with simplicity,and more is not always,better.
Teditis...diggin' in are you?..grin...and..dwelling....sometimes,you leave me the most charming words....i may be diggin' in....again a grin..im allowed....

You are very observant. (Is there a I tip my hat to you emoticon?)

Yeah, diggin' in, me. Dwelling, always.
No sweetheart... we are not allowed this... we simply choose it.
After all, what does that get us?

My passion is always genuine... my passion for you and your writing is very sincere.
Never-the-less... simplicity is road that we'll take.

never-the-less

i see poetry in you for me

Write it then... I'll be your muse.
Be gentle though...

darling.though that is also true...
i meant it in a different way

tell me how?

i..being me....
see......
in you....
poetry....
you have..
in you...
for me....


(ummm...not in the last little bit...laughing..)

You are a treasure.
You can write that poetry... me, not so well.

Still... you are all that comes with the craft.
Rhyme and reason... nuance and hidden agenda.
Clearly spoken and something never said at all.

I'll wait and watch... that's my craft.