Topic: The Crueality
RainbowTrout's photo
Thu 06/13/13 03:19 PM
I tried so hard just to be your friend.
Did not ever want our nights to end.
So much I gave up just for our sake.
Let down my hair and you did take.

Rapunzel morphed to Medusa then.
Alice's looking glass took a friend.
Mirror, mirror on the gigantic wall
Humpty-Dumpty and Alice did fall.

Snow White's and Rose Red's chill
As Jack and Jill fall down that hill.
Morning Dove and Grey Wolf fell.
They focused on the yearling quail.

The quail would fly with his kind.
But alone it was if he was so blind.
Words he wanted so much to say.
But Alice all he could do was play.

Looking through the looking glass.
Her reflection was like a trespass.
Still the answers can not be found.
Just ashes, ashes we all fall down.

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Thu 06/13/13 03:36 PM


NICE !

searchingsearching's photo
Thu 06/13/13 03:40 PM
i;m with kik2me
nice one :banana:

searchingsearching's photo
Thu 06/13/13 03:40 PM
i'm with kik2me
nice one :banana:

RainbowTrout's photo
Thu 06/13/13 07:33 PM
:smile: Thank you.

pkh's photo
Fri 06/14/13 02:18 AM
Nice

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Fri 06/14/13 07:02 AM
drinker biggrin :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

pennyg281's photo
Fri 06/14/13 10:04 PM
flowerforyou nice write. :)

Affectionisme's photo
Sat 06/15/13 07:47 AM
That was beautifully written......i really liked it........