Topic: beautiful intensity
MariahsFantasy's photo
Sun 06/29/14 08:49 PM
need a place to store my poetry readings

figure i'd do it here, love any and all feedback

first one i did is a cover of kc's

it's called: Beautifully Cracked...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XlgJzz8lT1Q

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Mon 06/30/14 07:43 AM
Great reading! The way you project your voice definitely complements the words perfectly. Always difficult to read someone else's work. Also, the video was done well.

Dig it. *smile*

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Mon 06/30/14 08:51 AM
Edited by plastic_pancakes on Mon 06/30/14 08:53 AM
You have to copy and paste the url, folks.

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Mon 06/30/14 09:53 AM
Or you Mac users can highlight, drag, and drop in the address line!:wink:

Audrey, this is a great start!:thumbsup: ...Now how about a reading of your awesome poetry beautiful!!...:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

MariahsFantasy's photo
Mon 06/30/14 11:38 AM
sorry all, hopefully you can view it now. hope kc thought it was halfway decent, it was an interesting idea.

thanks for the comments. i haven't made mine yet but i will.

thank you! bigsmile

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Mon 06/30/14 11:41 AM

sorry all, hopefully you can view it now. hope kc thought it was halfway decent, it was an interesting idea.

thanks for the comments. i haven't made mine yet but i will.

thank you! bigsmile


bigsmile

Looking forward to it girlfriend!flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Mon 06/30/14 06:28 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Mon 06/30/14 06:29 PM
http://youtu.be/XlgJzz8lT1Q


here, i grabbed the link...



ill be back later to let you know what i think....

Thomas27's photo
Sun 07/06/14 06:58 AM
Red storm of passion you are :)

Beautiful reading, your voice depicts the interpretation wonderfully! flowerforyou

MariahsFantasy's photo
Sun 07/06/14 10:09 AM
Edited by MariahsFantasy on Sun 07/06/14 10:11 AM

Red storm of passion you are :)

Beautiful reading, your voice depicts the interpretation wonderfully! flowerforyou


bigsmile thank you Thomas! :heart: flowerforyou

MariahsFantasy's photo
Sun 07/06/14 05:09 PM
Edited by MariahsFantasy on Sun 07/06/14 05:10 PM
And now, my own.

A recent one I wrote called...Flutter

http://youtu.be/alncJYIO8sU

Thomas27's photo
Sun 07/06/14 05:19 PM
Totally f-ing awesome! Love it!!

Amazing again!! flowerforyou

bemma1989's photo
Sun 07/06/14 05:28 PM

And now, my own.

A recent one I wrote called...Flutter

http://youtu.be/alncJYIO8sU

There is something overwhelming about that which i can't put my finger on. Your voice sounds almost childlike which gives it even more, (when I say childlike I meant that as a compliment).
You are talented.

kc0003's photo
Mon 07/07/14 07:38 AM
Good job on mine. I know you had lots of reservations, but it worked. Thanks for giving it your interpretation...

Your piece... there is something very different about doing our own work, a comfort that is sometimes hard to capture when read other's poems.

Recording is a learning process, as we have discussed, but not unlike posting our work in written form, we become more and more at ease over time.

This one is a good piece and in no way does it lose any texture with the addition of your voice. Look forward to more in the future.

MariahsFantasy's photo
Mon 07/07/14 08:40 AM

Totally f-ing awesome! Love it!!

Amazing again!! flowerforyou


Thanks Thomas flowerforyou bigsmile

MariahsFantasy's photo
Mon 07/07/14 08:43 AM


And now, my own.

A recent one I wrote called...Flutter

http://youtu.be/alncJYIO8sU

There is something overwhelming about that which i can't put my finger on. Your voice sounds almost childlike which gives it even more, (when I say childlike I meant that as a compliment).
You are talented.


Wow, very interesting you caught this. I think the more I do this the more I will mature into it. I still don't know if it's my thing but I'm doing ok with it for now. :)
Thank you! bigsmile blushing :heart:

MariahsFantasy's photo
Tue 07/08/14 05:49 PM

Good job on mine. I know you had lots of reservations, but it worked. Thanks for giving it your interpretation...

Your piece... there is something very different about doing our own work, a comfort that is sometimes hard to capture when read other's poems.

Recording is a learning process, as we have discussed, but not unlike posting our work in written form, we become more and more at ease over time.

This one is a good piece and in no way does it lose any texture with the addition of your voice. Look forward to more in the future.


Thank you. :smile:

MariahsFantasy's photo
Sun 07/13/14 07:53 PM
Edited by MariahsFantasy on Sun 07/13/14 08:16 PM
One from many years ago...

It's called...Stripped Part 1

http://youtu.be/79ZDKnTGR5w

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Sun 07/13/14 08:27 PM
I agree with plastic pancakes about how your voice complements the poem , great poem .:smile:

MariahsFantasy's photo
Mon 07/14/14 10:19 PM

I agree with plastic pancakes about how your voice complements the poem , great poem .:smile:


Thank you so much! bigsmile blushing

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Mon 07/14/14 10:23 PM
and now here's Stripped Part 2....

http://youtu.be/cTI-WEU8_os