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Topic: What I feel
elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Mon 02/23/15 07:31 AM
I want to write about what I feel, For I have been with you for twenty two years. I wish I can turn the pain so real, For leaving you takes a river of tears. I am going to be in a new journey without fear, For life is worth living in fierce.

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Mon 02/23/15 07:33 AM
Nice but sad, if that makes sense

elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Mon 02/23/15 07:37 AM
Nice but sad, if that makes sense yeah, trying to turn pain to power/art.

devildog123 Joined Mon 09/08/14 Posts: 3902	Mon 02/23/15 08:01 AM
Nice but sad, if that makes sense yeah, trying to turn pain to power/art. very nice poem, Elle

elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Mon 02/23/15 08:07 AM
Nice but sad, if that makes sense yeah, trying to turn pain to power/art. very nice poem, Elle Thank you!

Deepudarkchocolate Joined Sat 02/21/15 Posts: 91	Mon 02/23/15 08:07 AM
Your new journey is going to be full of happiness ELLE

elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Mon 02/23/15 08:11 AM
Your new journey is going to be full of happiness ELLE Thank you choco

mysticalview21 Joined Sat 06/28/14 Posts: 5462	Mon 02/23/15 10:13 AM
nice write op ... hope it helped ...

elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Mon 02/23/15 03:41 PM
nice write op ... hope it helped ... Yes, thank u

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Mon 02/23/15 03:51 PM
I want to write about what I feel, For I have been with you for twenty two years. I wish I can turn the pain so real, For leaving you takes a river of tears. I am going to be in a new journey without fear, For life is worth living in fierce. Very nice

elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Mon 02/23/15 04:02 PM
I want to write about what I feel, For I have been with you for twenty two years. I wish I can turn the pain so real, For leaving you takes a river of tears. I am going to be in a new journey without fear, For life is worth living in fierce. Very nice Thanks cutie

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Tue 02/24/15 02:26 AM
Sorry, elle_rose, I found your piece. Must be these early mornings. Me eyes get gummed up. ( lol ) Great meaning in your words. Noticeable feelings. As said previous by an admirer, 'Sad'.

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Tue 02/24/15 02:26 AM Edited by tommyboy1101 on Tue 02/24/15 02:46 AM


elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Tue 02/24/15 02:55 AM
Sorry, elle_rose, I found your piece. Must be these early mornings. Me eyes get gummed up. ( lol ) Great meaning in your words. Noticeable feelings. As said previous by an admirer, 'Sad'. Thanks again Tom. Hope to write a happy one soon....

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Tue 02/24/15 02:57 AM


elle_rose Joined Sat 07/26/14 Posts: 828	Tue 02/24/15 04:44 AM

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