Topic: Fear for the incomprehensible
lovebentbackwards's photo
Sun 07/12/15 03:17 PM
My fear is for every/any
Man or woman who feels
In the heart too much
Space taken by neglect.
A soul pained by hurtful
Words or actions that
Made them feel the disrespect.
A mind too overly complexed by
So many burden filled
Memoirs to recollect.
I fear for every
man/woman that have
To go through this.
The elongated struggle
On the road to bliss.
Incomprehensible
Is unnecessary pain
Too much felt
With no explanation.
A situation that can
Not be explained
When there is nobody
To be found or heard.
Nobody's to blame
So let's write something on
A post send the problem
Away. Tie to a pigeon
To fade away, fly away with the bird.
Society has a way to
Sometimes make people shut out..
Sometimes as people we just want to be heard.
Not so weary is our knowledge.
Our hearts can be the same.
If simple convo, get to
Know a stranger.
Simply ask for a name.

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Sun 07/12/15 03:25 PM
Nice name, good write. Thank you for sharing. flowerforyou


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Sun 07/12/15 05:56 PM
Edited by JaUkNz on Sun 07/12/15 05:56 PM
Feeling you on this flowerforyou hugs, love and peace for ALL

germanchoclate1981's photo
Sun 07/12/15 10:27 PM
First post in this category I happened to catch that makes sense. I felt like this too many times to count.

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Sun 07/12/15 10:41 PM

My fear is for every/any
Man or woman who feels
In the heart too much
Space taken by neglect.
A soul pained by hurtful
Words or actions that
Made them feel the disrespect.
A mind too overly complexed by
So many burden filled
Memoirs to recollect.
I fear for every
man/woman that have
To go through this.
The elongated struggle
On the road to bliss.
Incomprehensible
Is unnecessary pain
Too much felt
With no explanation.
A situation that can
Not be explained
When there is nobody
To be found or heard.
Nobody's to blame
So let's write something on
A post send the problem
Away. Tie to a pigeon
To fade away, fly away with the bird.
Society has a way to
Sometimes make people shut out..
Sometimes as people we just want to be heard.
Not so weary is our knowledge.
Our hearts can be the same.
If simple convo, get to
Know a stranger.
Simply ask for a name.


very nice.
what once was lost thru neglect and disrespect of some, can be found with a shared expression and feeling with another.
very fitting.:thumbsup:

lovebentbackwards's photo
Sun 07/12/15 10:42 PM
Thank you German chocolate 1982
And jaunkz also lu_Rosemary for
Your posts :-)

lovebentbackwards's photo
Sun 07/12/15 10:45 PM
Thank you German chocolate 1982
And jaunkz also lu_Rosemary for
Your posts pansytilly too:-)