Topic: Constructive criticism, pls...
Inducive's photo
Tue 05/02/17 06:54 PM
Curious as to what one thinks when they gaze upon my creation. "Don't be cruel" (in my Bobby B. voice)

PacificStar48's photo
Tue 05/02/17 09:16 PM
This is good compared to most but could be great. EVEN one for look at this guys profile for how it's done.

Tweek the arrangement of your text out of interest down in the profile text section. Leave the interest there. If you used more than generic interest terms one or two places would draw some intelligent inquiries and make it easier to weed out the scammers.

DITCH what peeves you. You are maybe an old soul in a young man butt your not old enough to fall on your own sword complaining to people you don't want in valuable profile real estate when the goal is to atteract what you do want.

Normally I would say ditch an unsmiling photo where you don't make eye contact but the composition of this photo is good and compliments your very good features. BUT yes you have to put up at least one that does the connect with a good natural smile. And one with no hat. Maybe a full length photo to referance your height. Pictures that do dual purpose of telling a story about an interest,ability, or accomplishment is always a good choice for a guy who I bet can hold a conversation given a subject.

GOOD LUCK