Topic: The Walk of a Shaman~
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Sun 09/04/22 07:13 AM
Please
Dont
Ask
Me
To watch your body continue to
Atrophy.
That would strangle the
Breath
Out
Of
Me.

Please
Dont
Ask
Me
To hold you
Tight.
My strength would break your brittle
Bones
On
Sight.

Please
Dont
Ask
Me
To remember
When.
My memories are clouded
Guarded
Within.

Please
Dont
Ask
Me
To take away your
Pain.
Syringes full of
Morphine
And
My defeated spirit
Sitting at your
Bedside.

Sprinting towards the ending of
The
Walk
Of
A
Shaman.



4 September 2022

delightfulillusion's photo
Sun 09/04/22 07:38 AM
Beautiful Stormy.

Your words really touched my soul. I’ve been there and I’m thinking about you :heart:

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Sun 09/04/22 08:47 AM
Thank you, DelightfulIllusion.

Ive been there as well. If he asks me to be the one, Id be honored. Heartbroken but honored. :heart:

Riverspirit1111's photo
Sun 09/04/22 11:30 AM
Very touchy, great poem Stormy :heart:

JulieABush's photo
Sun 09/04/22 01:38 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Sun 09/04/22 05:58 PM
Thanks River.

Thank you, Julie.

Laska Paul 's photo
Sun 09/04/22 10:58 PM


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Good Start and a well based ending.! Kuddos !!!

pumpilicious 💕's photo
Mon 09/05/22 10:30 AM
:broken_heart:This hits too close:sleepy:

Larsi666 😽's photo
Mon 09/05/22 10:33 AM
Wow, this is impressive ...

technovative's photo
Tue 09/06/22 08:37 AM
A poignant expression that hit's home for many, Storm.

mig25's photo
Wed 09/07/22 03:41 PM
You, Ladywind, and technovative honestly inspire me. I think you all exceptional poets and reading your work allows me to grow as I write. And this poem doesn't disappoint.