Topic: lighthouse by sweetwater2
Sweetwater2's photo
Tue 03/11/08 07:07 PM
She stands there with strength and courage,a beauty for all to see,taking a life full of storm and turbulent seas, His ship is battered and pounded loosing hope fast, as sails crowsnest and masts come to crash, the waves relentless,all seems lost he prays to survive this turbulant tempest,but a what cost As he looks out to hope for shore, he sees her light,and opens the door,for the sea tonite will not settle its score, Like an angel with fire who lights the nite,giving him hope he will survive this fright, To him her beauty is totality unrivaled,she helped him through seas so uncontrolled and wild, As he guides his ship towards the shore, she offers her light forever more.:smile:

dragonyosh's photo
Tue 03/11/08 07:08 PM
that was beautiful and very moving brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!

marangu88's photo
Tue 03/11/08 07:11 PM
beautiful. I like it

Sweetwater2's photo
Tue 03/11/08 07:33 PM
Edited by Sweetwater2 on Tue 03/11/08 07:56 PM
flowerforyou

ladeanna's photo
Tue 03/11/08 07:34 PM
I see the light by the shore & hope it calms the high seas in him & never be broken for ever more...Sweetwater2flowerforyou

I'm not a poet but thought I might chime in there with ya! :wink:

Sweetwater2's photo
Tue 03/11/08 08:41 PM
Thank you!:smile:

Sweetwater2's photo
Sat 03/29/08 10:48 AM
Tried to edit thisohwell

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/29/08 10:50 AM
Beautiful write, inspirring... flowerforyou :smile:

no photo
Sat 03/29/08 10:54 AM
Nice floating PLACE to share,,,THANKS,,drinker drinker

pkh's photo
Sat 03/29/08 11:18 AM
Just beautiful

Sweetwater2's photo
Sat 03/29/08 05:42 PM
I was inspired by romance when I wrote this one.

DAMER4's photo
Sat 03/29/08 07:01 PM
Dude cool