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Wed 09/12/18 04:29 PM

It's very well written and very relatable to me. Thanks for sharing


Thank you and glad you liked smile2

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Mon 09/10/18 02:44 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Mon 09/10/18 02:47 PM
There's a storm raging within,
A million thoughts on my mind,
Yet I sit across from you,
Sipping coffee as if everything is fine..

I feel the darkness surrounding me,
Like the emotions I feel,
How do I control my dark thoughts,
They are now starting to give me a guilt..

If only you knew,
The thoughts that race in my mind,
As soon as I see you each day,
Would you accept them with an open heart,
Or just stand up and walk away..

My voice is lost,
The words don't form,
I keep quiet,
And my desire,
Is now slowly turning into,
A lifeless stone..

You look at me with a smile,
In complete denial,
Why are you testing my patience,
We talk nonstop,
Each time we meet in person,
..But have you ever heard my silence..

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Mon 09/10/18 01:08 AM
Depends on how strong willed and determined both people are and how much they can withstand the opinions and views of everyone around them.

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Wed 09/05/18 02:37 PM

Nice!!



Thank you smile2

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Tue 09/04/18 04:44 AM
Never thought this was a place,
Where I would find,
Someone special to meet,
But boy was i wrong,
I met you here,
And you swept me,
Right off my feet..

I fell under your spell,
Your beauty, your charm,
My own fairy tale,
And this place became magical,
Never believed in love at first sight,
But really you were something special..

I lost my mind,
And my precious heart,
Only came here to see you,
But now this distance between us,
Both emotional and physical,
Is tearing me apart..

Trying but can't forget you,
If only you promise,
To stop invading my thoughts,
And stop coming in my dreams,
Then I can move on,
And finally live in peace..

Not a single day passes,
That I don't think about you,
But I know we have different paths,
Maybe slowly your memory will fade away,
But for now,
Lets see how long this madness lasts..



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Mon 09/03/18 10:23 PM

That's really nice.


Thank you smile2

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Sun 09/02/18 05:33 PM
No matter how hard I try,
To run away from you,
All paths of my life,
Lead me back to you..

I try not to talk,
I try to ignore you,
But the heart has its own will,
And it wants only you..

Why I feel so lost and confused,
Why I feel this urge to merge with you,
Why I lose control,
Even if I just think of you..

Why am I so scared,
To get close to you,
Why I want you so much and yet,
Try my best to stay away from you..

Is this just craziness,
Or a battle between heart and mind,
Against you...For you,
Or maybe I am just a lost soul,
Whose destiny is joined with you..

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Wed 08/29/18 12:32 PM


How you walked into my heart?
Very quietly without making a sound,
There wasn't a shadow anywhere,
And no footsteps on the ground..

Still I kept you close in my heart,
Like da precious jewel you are,
I kept hoping we would meet someday,
In da meantime loving you from afar..

But you kept your secrets,
Wanted me to read your mind,
You didn't say what you felt,
And we pretended everything was fine..

Then things went wrong,
We felt we had enough,
Couldn't we have tried abit more,
Without so easily giving up?

I am trying now to find a way,
To your heart,
To win you back,
But how do I reach you?
There is no shadow,
And you didn't leave any footsteps..


Nice poem Neelam :thumbsup:

"Life is queer with its twists and turns, 
As every one of us sometimes learns, 
And many a failure turns about, 
When he might have won had he stuck it out; 
Don't give up though the pace seems slow-- 
You may succeed with another blow."
smile2


Thank you
You write well too smile2

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Sat 08/25/18 05:19 PM

Hey neelam, cute one like you


Thank you smile2

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Tue 08/21/18 03:31 PM

Lovely poem, Neelamz
thank you for sharing


Thank you dear ☺

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Tue 08/21/18 02:32 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Tue 08/21/18 02:55 PM
How you walked into my heart?
Very quietly without making a sound,
There wasn't a shadow anywhere,
And no footsteps on the ground..

Still I kept you close in my heart,
Like da precious jewel you are,
I kept hoping we would meet someday,
In da meantime loving you from afar..

But you kept your secrets,
Wanted me to read your mind,
You didn't say what you felt,
And we pretended everything was fine..

Then things went wrong,
We felt we had enough,
Couldn't we have tried abit more,
Without so easily giving up?

I am trying now to find a way,
To your heart,
To win you back,
But how do I reach you?
There is no shadow,
And you didn't leave any footsteps..

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Mon 08/20/18 08:41 PM

very good


Thank you smile2

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Sat 08/18/18 10:33 PM

Very beautiful


Thank you smile2

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Fri 08/17/18 06:58 PM

Lovely poem, Neelamz flowerforyou


Thank you smile2

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Fri 08/17/18 06:43 PM

So beautiful and so true


Thank you smile2

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Fri 08/17/18 04:05 PM

Very nice Neelamz.


Thank you smile2

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Fri 08/17/18 03:59 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Fri 08/17/18 04:00 PM
The very first time I saw you,
I felt my dream had come true,
You were handsome beyond my dreams,
And you had such a nice personality too :-)

Then the arguments started,
The words, the friction, the stress,
No matter how hard I tried,
For you,
My efforts were always less :-(

If someone asked me,
What was the cause?
What went wrong?
I don't know what to say, I have no idea,
Except its beyond my control,

How can I not think,
How each time you leave,
Without looking back,
How can you be so cold,
Where is the warmth I felt,
When we first met?

I wait, and wait more for you,
But my pain, my tears, my heartbreak,
Seem to have no effect,
So just tell me straight.
How can you act as if you have no regret?
Was I that easy to forget?

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Sun 08/12/18 05:18 AM

Lovely flowerforyou


Thank you :slight_smile: :slight_smile:

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Sun 08/12/18 04:33 AM
Edited by Jasmine on Sun 08/12/18 05:28 AM
Why this heart loves someone,
Who doesn't love it back,
Why this heart suffers from unrequited love,
Till it gets cracked,

Why the heart chases someone,
Who treats it like crap,
And shuns those,
Who treat it with respect,

Why the heart wants love from special someone,
And forgets that there are,
Options more than one,
Why we cry and want only that person,
Who doesn't care or worse,
Is taking everything in fun,

When will our hearts stop glorifying the pain,
And learn to be strong and tough,
When will our hearts say enough is enough,
And not be fooled anymore by this crazy love.


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Thu 08/09/18 03:28 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Thu 08/09/18 03:31 PM
Day and night,
Without hope in sight,
I still wait,
For a sign from you,
I thought we were perfect,
Did you ever feel the same way too?

The path is not easy,
With past hurts and pain,
Words which were spoken and,
Left unspoken in vain,
But..Can we make a fresh start again?

I find you so adorable,
Both by your form and your heart,
I am sorry that my confusion,
Caused us to drift apart..

I dream of a future in love,
Filled with happiness,
Without tears and sorrow,
And hope our love story becomes memorable too,
Like those famous love stories of long ago.