It's a pretty good profile. It's a little jarring that you use your full name as your screen name, and then repeat it in the blurb, as if it wasn't clear before. But the photo is clear enough and you took the time to write about yourself, which is better than most.

I like that your photo clearly shows your face, but the lighting is weird and makes the photo look heavily filtered. For better results, maybe take another picture where the light is better--like outside during the day-- and look into the camera lens when taking the picture. A smile could make you look more approachable. Maybe just a confident grin to show you're proud of how far you've come.

It's odd that your blurb complains about the default "Hi.." in people's profiles, and your profile headline is the default "Hi.." Ironic. And the part in your blurb where you identify yourself doesn't seem to fit. Maybe remove the "I Sadhana Pathak, General Physician." and it would look better. It appears you typed this on mobile, so when viewed on the web, the line breaks don't display and it looks like there's no space between the sentences (not your fault--it's a problem with the website) but you can make it look better for people if you just add a space after each period.

Anyway, it's clear that you put a lot of work on this and the photo shows you're an attractive young woman, so you should do alright. But for the profile with the default "Hi.." headline and photo and blurb that could be better, I'd rate this 9/10. Nice work!

Good luck!