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Topic: ok lets get a rate on profile 2.1
gunblademaster Joined Wed 01/10/07 Posts: 225	Mon 04/07/08 12:16 AM
Do your worst

chachacha Joined Wed 02/21/07 Posts: 409	Mon 04/07/08 12:20 AM
hmmmm so youre a cowboy and a soldier, sometimes you have hair and sometimes you dont . .. you dog is cute as hell .. . if i was a cowboy lovin 20 year old i would give you a 10. i am however a 39 year old with preference for . . . .?

Silentrob Joined Thu 11/15/07 Posts: 1790	Mon 04/07/08 12:21 AM
hmmmm so youre a cowboy and a soldier, sometimes you have hair and sometimes you dont . .. you dog is cute as hell .. . if i was a cowboy lovin 20 year old i would give you a 10. i am however a 39 year old with preference for . . . .? ouch lol

JaceKnows Joined Mon 11/12/07 Posts: 5110	Mon 04/07/08 12:21 AM
hmmmm so youre a cowboy and a soldier, sometimes you have hair and sometimes you dont . .. you dog is cute as hell .. . if i was a cowboy lovin 20 year old i would give you a 10. i am however a 39 year old with preference for . . . .? ....Wisconsin? Good looking out, Gunblade! You'll do good here!

whatdoyaknow Joined Mon 01/28/08 Posts: 341	Mon 04/07/08 12:22 AM
awww your cute... if i were your age and you emailed me I would write back

gunblademaster Joined Wed 01/10/07 Posts: 225	Mon 04/07/08 08:25 AM
Thanks guys but is there anything that I should fix or add???

solestria Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 204	Mon 04/07/08 10:45 AM
I would fix the punctuation. Your sentences need some commas, and a few of them should be more than one sentence and haven't been made so. It makes it hard to read. The info is good, it's just that the delivery could use a bit of work.

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