Topic: Love Unspoken
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Mon 01/22/07 10:51 PM
The richness of words cannot begin to explain
The depths of my heart when I hear you exclaim
The sound of your name as it breaches my lips
Whispers softly and sweetly as I move my hips
Our souls enstranged in a warm lovers gaze
Loving and laughing through this magical haze
Grasping for breath my hands in your hair
Kissing and touching and tasting you there
Beading with sweat our skin moist to the touch
Silently aching wanting so much
Our passion is fueled from the flames felt within
The heat of my love sucking you in
Our words remain thoughts and the silence unbroken
This ecstasy we feel is Love Unspoken

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/22/07 11:00 PM
Dayum!!!

Good work NewBee!!!
S.L.....that is without a doubt,
one of the best poems I've read...

just one question...

what is..."enstranged"...is this just a typo?

joe1973's photo
Tue 01/23/07 12:16 AM
enstranged is not a typo.

michael1313's photo
Tue 01/23/07 12:22 AM
just thought it might be Estranged..."N" being th typo...
was wanting the poet to clear that up for me...

define enstranged please...

heatherrae's photo
Tue 01/23/07 03:40 AM
bump.

TakeMeHome's photo
Tue 01/23/07 06:49 AM
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

"Estranged"

Single by Guns N' Roses
from the album Use Your Illusion II
Released 1993
Recorded 1991
Genre Hard Rock
Length 9:23
Label Geffen Records
Writer(s) Axl Rose
Guns N' Roses singles chronology
"Hair of the Dog" (1994) "Estranged" (1994) "Since I Don't Have You"
(1994)

"Estranged" is a song and music video by the American hard rock band
Guns N' Roses, from their album Use Your Illusion II.

"Estranged" is one of Guns N' Roses' longest running songs, as well as
one of the longest and most expensive music videos ever made. It has
many verses, and no set chorus, as well as distinguished guitar and
piano solos. Use Your Illusion II's liner notes thank Slash for "the
killer guitar melodies," which captured Axl Rose's vision.


heHe!

michael1313's photo
Tue 01/23/07 09:00 AM
TakeMeHome...
that was nice,but it still did not define the word...

"Enstranged"

my dictionary is just too old...that word is not in it...

michael1313's photo
Tue 01/23/07 09:08 AM
so I went online to look...

Merriam-Webster:

The word you've entered isn't in the dictionary. Click on a spelling
suggestion below or try again using the search bar above.

Suggestions for enstranged:
1. estranged
2. unstrained
3. earnestness
4. unstrapped
5. instanced
6. unstressed
7. unsaturated
8. instanter
9. arctangent
10. instauration
11. unseparated

so...was this a typo???