Topic: Ramble on motormouth
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Thu 04/24/08 12:43 AM
I met a girl on justsayhi
unlike the girls on dating sites
one part cool,one part uptight
my eyes are stoned,but spins my mind
beyond this world,where eagles fly
and spacemen dare to turn back time
the clock ticks on,no time retreats
it slowly crawls to its steady beat
I listen close,I try to speak
but every sentence I cant complete
all the oohs and ahs and ums
are placed before each word will come
and though my question takes no time to ask
the answer lies as the hours pass
your favorite color,and most would say
I like blue,red green or grey
maybe black or orange or pink
but still simplicity will make her think
she asks me not to think shes dumb
her mind and beauty combines as one
a soul that brings this man to wonder
how she turns a cloud to thunder
a drop of water turns to oceans so deep
and small emotions begins to creep
like something on the verge of explosion
that all began with a crazy notion
but when you meet someone of such intellect
it begins to make such perfect sense
As most women wish,her too is the same
just a man to listen,without playing games
her heart is fragile,and so easily torn
the battle began when she was born
a life so dark with love unfelt
the rules implied,enforced the belt
and it takes me to my own childhood
where mama said that boys no good
and I looked so hard to find a friend
but it always took me to a lonely end
so if all I can do is be quiet for you
then ramble on motormouth
I will someday learn to be amazing just like you

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Thu 04/24/08 12:50 AM
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

hikerchick's photo
Thu 04/24/08 04:42 AM
wow. Nice.flowerforyou

rush2001's photo
Thu 04/24/08 05:17 AM
Applause , Applause.:smile: flowerforyou :heart:

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Thu 04/24/08 08:49 AM
You're the sweetest JT!
She's a lucky lady!flowerforyou flowerforyou