Topic: Carried By Tears
I_am_Tater's photo
Tue 05/06/08 01:16 PM
Stuck with my earthly restrictions
For God only knows how long
I continue on with my days
Sleep away the nights
As best I can at least
Sometimes your voice cuts through the silence
A hand faintly brushes my cheek
Urging me to wake from the dreamless sleep
After doing so and my senses return
Reality hits once again
It hadn't been you at all
Tears fall like rain
Lying there alone I cannot help but think
If only tears could carry me
I'd grab hold of your hand
We would finish what we started
Move ahead with all the plans...
Sometimes I can almost see us
You standing at the alter
An eager but patient smile
Just waiting for my father to give you my hand
Eyes misty with tears he finds his seat
The preacher begins
But the words are muffled
By the thunderous beating of my heart
From this moment on I will be your wife
That's the way we planned it anyway
Now I'm left with nothing but wishes and dreams
Your hand is out of reach

Dragonfire201's photo
Tue 05/06/08 01:20 PM
Nice happy

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 05/06/08 01:20 PM
Nice write, very thoughtful. :wink:

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 05/06/08 01:22 PM
much like the rain, you'll be around and back again

remember you and yours and don't forget your friends.

Army_Strong's photo
Tue 05/06/08 01:32 PM
flowerforyou da da da daaaaaaaaaaa super tater does it again with another great write flowerforyou

I_am_Tater's photo
Tue 05/06/08 01:35 PM

flowerforyou da da da daaaaaaaaaaa super tater does it again with another great write flowerforyou


LOL i dunno about great but thanks hun :)

Army_Strong's photo
Tue 05/06/08 02:03 PM


flowerforyou da da da daaaaaaaaaaa super tater does it again with another great write flowerforyou


LOL i dunno about great but thanks hun :)


any time tater. any time

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 05/06/08 02:07 PM
frown flowerforyou (((Tater)))
Good but sad write...

AngelLight's photo
Tue 05/06/08 02:10 PM
:cry: :heart: