Topic: My tears started to flow
rodfcutler's photo
Sun 05/25/08 11:24 AM

My tears started to flow
for I began to know,
that when you left,
you left for good
never wanted you to go.

I stood there helplesly
as you packed your bags,
threw me away
felt like a dirty old rag.

I watched you go
as you drove slowly away,
and havent been the same
throughout the following days.

Became a lonely old man
with a trembling heart,
though I tried to heal
that never could start.

The pain of my lonliness
broke my will to live,
I had nothing more
was torn to my core
had nothing else to give.
brokenheart



msdestinbooty's photo
Sun 05/25/08 11:25 AM
:cry: flowerforyou flowerforyou

rodfcutler's photo
Sun 05/25/08 11:36 AM
Thanks for your reply.Have a great weekend!

ShyKBear's photo
Sun 05/25/08 11:50 AM
:cry: flowerforyou :cry:

no photo
Sun 05/25/08 11:55 AM
WHERE have I heard this poem???huh

rodfcutler's photo
Mon 05/26/08 12:17 AM
Is mine,pure and simple!

BonnyMiss's photo
Mon 05/26/08 04:08 AM
Physician heal thyself ( you are capable) may not seem like it at the moment.
And Gypsy, I think it is down to the "break-up" theme that makes this poem seem familiar to you..................Seen lots of this lately and it makes me sad.