Topic: Rain
DeathsTreaty's photo
Sun 06/08/08 07:01 PM
Home alone with a high hope of rain,
hope for rain only to hide the tears that need to be shed,
watch each drop hit your face as you stare straight up,
watching the drops and shedding the tear with a frown on your face,
The tears filled with pain and confusion,
staring straight up to ask for answers,
drop to your knees to pled and beg for some kind of comfort,
the slow silence of the drops'. '. '. '. '. '. '. '. '.' .' '. '. '. '. '. '. '. .' . '. '. .' . '. '. .' .' . '. .' . '. '
the pitter patter speaking and giving the comfort you long for,
the loud drips break the silence,
and you relize the rain has stopped,
the pitter patter no longer eases the pain from the tears that still shed and drip from you eyes,
and
Home alone with a high hope of rain

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 06/08/08 07:03 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Sun 06/08/08 07:05 PM
treaty, your writing is so moving. it is your door flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:41 PM
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DeathsTreaty's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:42 PM
Interesting Tender Bastet...^^

bastet126's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:43 PM
damn...you're fast devil i will have to use my super powers to elude you!

brooke007's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:43 PM
love the rain
flowerforyou flowerforyou

DeathsTreaty's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:44 PM
Thats kind of Funny ^^"

bastet126's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:45 PM

Thats kind of Funny ^^"


laugh laugh missed me again :tongue:

DeathsTreaty's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:46 PM
In time Tender Bastet ^^

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:48 PM
Nice write DeathsTreaty. I think the rainmakers got confused and brought pain instead of rain again....lol

DeathsTreaty's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:50 PM
Thanx FadedSpirit ^^


I like the pain a bit more then the pain sometimes ^^

pkh's photo
Mon 06/09/08 07:52 PM
flowerforyou good write