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hi guys
please could you look over my profile and tell me what you all think and if there is anything i need to improve on any help would be gratly recived thanks |
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hi guys please could you look over my profile and tell me what you all think and if there is anything i need to improve on any help would be gratly recived thanks Looks okay You could always add more pictures and write more about yourself
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Your interests could use a spell check
(like I'm one to talk...but you asked.)
Nice pics, I'd maybe write more about yourself and what you are looking for. |
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perhaps smile more and a bit more commentary!
good luck!
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ok made a few changes thanks everyone for the help
as for the pics i guess i need to get the cam out huh lol |
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Better! Good Luck.
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Looks okay
(like I'm one to talk...but you asked.)