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Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill? Laughing and dancing like a dream its joy in the falling thrill. It plays among the trees and grass laughing and singing in its glee. Sounding like a happy lass reveling now that she is free. It runs and rushes over the cliff face and leaps into the air. Falling in a passionate grace like a lover's thrown back hair. Fallen down once again to earth it gleefully takes hold. Its joyful leap has given birth to a pool with waters, crisp and cold. And from the pool she'll dance away on her run to be free. Until on some special day she will join her lover in the sea. Have you ever watched a mountain stream as it dances down the hill? Will we, like her, run for a dream or will we sit here waiting still? |
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nice poem
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Edited by
bastet126
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Tue 07/29/08 05:22 AM
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somehow this reminds me of someone i know, but i never could have put it so eloquently
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somehow this reminds me of someone i know, but i never could have put it to eloquently ![]() ty miror hmmm I might have had someone in mind let me think about it thanks beautiful ![]() |
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Have you ever watched a mountain stream as it dances down the hill? Laughing and dancing like a dream its joy in the falling thrill. It plays among the trees and grass laughing and singing in its glee. Sounding like a happy lass reveling now that she is free. It runs and rushes over the cliff face and leaps into the air. Falling in a passionate grace like a lover's thrown back hair. Fallen down once again to earth it gleefully takes hold. Its joyful leap has given birth to a pool with waters, crisp and cold. And from the pool she'll dance away on her run to be free. Until on some special day she will join her lover in the sea. Have you ever watched a mountain stream as it dances down the hill? Will we, like her, run for a dream or will we sit here waiting still? ![]() Beautiful |
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Yes!
I'm feeling the metrics today. ![]() |
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to our dreams
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Have you ever watched a mountain stream as it dances down the hill? Laughing and dancing like a dream its joy in the falling thrill. It plays among the trees and grass laughing and singing in its glee. Sounding like a happy lass reveling now that she is free. It runs and rushes over the cliff face and leaps into the air. Falling in a passionate grace like a lover's thrown back hair. Fallen down once again to earth it gleefully takes hold. Its joyful leap has given birth to a pool with waters, crisp and cold. And from the pool she'll dance away on her run to be free. Until on some special day she will join her lover in the sea. Have you ever watched a mountain stream as it dances down the hill? Will we, like her, run for a dream or will we sit here waiting still? ![]() Beautiful thank you angel ![]() ![]() LA... thank you for thesighs ![]() ![]() |
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