Topic: Stream Dreams
PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 07/29/08 03:48 AM
Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill?
Laughing and dancing like a dream
its joy in the falling thrill.

It plays among the trees and grass
laughing and singing in its glee.
Sounding like a happy lass
reveling now that she is free.

It runs and rushes over the cliff face
and leaps into the air.
Falling in a passionate grace
like a lover's thrown back hair.

Fallen down once again to earth
it gleefully takes hold.
Its joyful leap has given birth
to a pool with waters, crisp and cold.

And from the pool she'll dance away
on her run to be free.
Until on some special day
she will join her lover in the sea.

Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill?
Will we, like her, run for a dream
or will we sit here waiting still?

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 07/29/08 03:51 AM
nice poemdrinker

bastet126's photo
Tue 07/29/08 05:03 AM
Edited by bastet126 on Tue 07/29/08 05:22 AM
somehow this reminds me of someone i know, but i never could have put it so eloquently flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 07/29/08 05:17 AM

somehow this reminds me of someone i know, but i never could have put it to eloquently flowerforyou



ty miror

hmmm I might have had someone in mind let me think about it thanks beautiful flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 07/29/08 10:32 AM

Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill?
Laughing and dancing like a dream
its joy in the falling thrill.

It plays among the trees and grass
laughing and singing in its glee.
Sounding like a happy lass
reveling now that she is free.

It runs and rushes over the cliff face
and leaps into the air.
Falling in a passionate grace
like a lover's thrown back hair.

Fallen down once again to earth
it gleefully takes hold.
Its joyful leap has given birth
to a pool with waters, crisp and cold.

And from the pool she'll dance away
on her run to be free.
Until on some special day
she will join her lover in the sea.

Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill?
Will we, like her, run for a dream
or will we sit here waiting still?



flowerforyou sigh's and takes in the stream...
Beautiful

d4tc's photo
Tue 07/29/08 11:32 AM
Yes!

I'm feeling the metrics today. drinker

AngelLight's photo
Tue 07/29/08 11:37 AM
to our dreams drinker

neat write Poetic flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 07/29/08 12:09 PM


Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill?
Laughing and dancing like a dream
its joy in the falling thrill.

It plays among the trees and grass
laughing and singing in its glee.
Sounding like a happy lass
reveling now that she is free.

It runs and rushes over the cliff face
and leaps into the air.
Falling in a passionate grace
like a lover's thrown back hair.

Fallen down once again to earth
it gleefully takes hold.
Its joyful leap has given birth
to a pool with waters, crisp and cold.

And from the pool she'll dance away
on her run to be free.
Until on some special day
she will join her lover in the sea.

Have you ever watched a mountain stream
as it dances down the hill?
Will we, like her, run for a dream
or will we sit here waiting still?



flowerforyou sigh's and takes in the stream...
Beautiful


thank you angel flowerforyou , J drinks

LA... thank you for thesighs bigsmile flowerforyou