Topic: Dislocated Heart
myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 08/20/08 09:17 PM
Feeling so much numb…I am
Throwing all the emotions out of myself
Still hidden fears and tears that tear me up
Dislocated I feel and dislocated my heart.

Going through all these hardships
I am unable to live like this,
Bounded I am and I have to live
With all these fears and tears I lock in my heart.

Why people are asking me that I look so dumb?
I don’t want to hear these things I say I am what I am
Why I am hiding this pain within my heart?
Why I am lying all of them that I am alive?

Dislocated I feel on this earth that I am unable to live
Dislocated I feel That I am not made to be live?
But why I can’t find any answer I had to live.
How many days I am surviving like this?

Couldn’t share my problem with anyone,
I am smiling and laughing after such a disaster.
Unable I am and hopeless I feel.
I am totally dislocated, wholly dislocated
Dislocated heart this is…

P.S. I am unable to live
Waiting for someone to make me alive

Jamesdei07's photo
Wed 08/20/08 09:20 PM
yea i hear ya by the way thats a really good way to describe it

no photo
Wed 08/20/08 09:21 PM
I have a heart condition and it's not funny to make poems about a dislocated heart!

LAMom's photo
Wed 08/20/08 09:21 PM
Come Here pretty one let me re-a-line your Heart,, Ohhhh I see you and hear you,, Look deep within,, Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa right
there,,Your alive as is your spirit,, fly high,, share your pain share your joys we are human,,, flyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

flowerforyou :heart:

myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 08/20/08 10:38 PM
Thank you so much

(((James flowerforyou & LA flowerforyou :heart:)))

s1owhand's photo
Thu 08/21/08 08:10 AM
beautiful (((myanimalc)))

everyone needs
:heart::heart:
heart-to-heart
resuscitation

bigsmile flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 08/21/08 09:35 AM
Very nicely done and well written and conveyed.

The tattered remnants of heart
May never truly be mended
But the gaps are filled in their time.
To live...Ahh to live again
One must not only have faith
But believe and awake.


Life is just a breath away
Like a shadow on the wall,
Live it like you've breathed your last
And be not fearful of the fall.