Topic: Redeemed
Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 08/21/08 10:30 AM
Redeemed

I couldn't speak my heart
For the words I could not say.
My lips had seemed so frozen
But I wanted you to stay.

Even in your anger
I saw an angel in my view.
I couldn't help but cry,
What was I to do?

You tore away the man
And left and empty shell.
You saw right through the darkness
And made me face my hell.

More than once I've lost you,
I knew it in my heart.
Each time that I enraged you,
A searing pain would start.

I never knew forgiveness,
The kind that gives a life.
I thought you'd be a name
Written in my book of strife.

I never thought you cared,
Though you I could never read.
You brought me back from darkness
And made me so believe.

I've never had the honor
To join an angel's heart
But here you are my darling
To make a brand new start.

Fadedspirit 8/21/2008

LAMom's photo
Thu 08/21/08 10:32 AM
Beautiful,,,, so Beautiful flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 08/21/08 10:35 AM
Awww, thanks LAMom. blushing

SimplyElla's photo
Thu 08/21/08 10:37 AM
flowerforyou That was nicely put... I enjoyed it... great job spirit

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 08/21/08 10:43 AM
Thanks SimplyElla, I'm glad you enjoyed. happy flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 08/21/08 10:54 AM
Hmmm kinda the way it feels when you post after a long silence.

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 08/22/08 06:00 AM
Hmm...DKW....true....Just don't get that awkward stare...lol

shauna22's photo
Sat 08/23/08 08:05 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 08/23/08 08:09 PM
Thanks again shauna! flowerforyou