Topic: Dark Clouds
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Sat 08/23/08 05:16 PM
The leaves have started to change
The nights are growing colder
And like the colors of the leaves
I am growing colder...older
Dark clouds hovering all around
Pushing me...down...down
Back to the ground
Crawling, begging on my knees
Won't the light please shine for me
Why must my heart pay..again today
I've got nothing left
I've been completely bled...out
Hurt...dispair..does no one care
Crawling here on broken glass
Pay with pain so in vain
Till now have not complained
I've had enough...i'm drained
Wilted petals surrounding ..
A bruised and beaten heart
Nothing left to give
Nothing left to take away
So now just be on your way

Etrain's photo
Sat 08/23/08 05:17 PM
ok...those could be awesome song lyricsdrinker drinker drinker I love them!!!

s1owhand's photo
Sat 08/23/08 05:53 PM
so nice to see you
writing such moving
emotions again

if only
it were not so dark
these days...

but you have
captured
the moment well

flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 08/23/08 07:57 PM
Excellent write, loved the emotion. flowerforyou