Topic: Sour love
Sakura2007's photo
Wed 03/28/07 10:17 PM
When I layed my eyes upon you.
My live became a dream.
You held me close.
My world was a dream.
My life was a fairy tale.
Whispers of the future...
The slightest touches.
Taking me to a point in life which I could never forget.
But life is like a roller coaster
it has its ups..
and downs....
My fears and panics...
I was forced to do somethign I never wanted to do...
I reach out to you.
You yell... holler and cuss.
I sit hear and listen...
Wishing you could understand...

"lose my email, stop trying to add me to your myspace, I don't ****ing
want to hear from you again."

songbirrd's photo
Wed 03/28/07 10:20 PM
That's goodflowerforyoulaugh

no photo
Wed 03/28/07 10:21 PM
WOW! That was pretty good. Good Job.

activemode's photo
Wed 03/28/07 10:28 PM
Yea, I know. Very well written.

Sakura2007's photo
Thu 03/29/07 06:51 AM
thanks guys