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valo666's photo
Fri 03/30/07 05:39 PM
I hear her voice and it melts my heart.
She soothes me in a way i thought was
impossible. She whispers i love you,
but i don't feel it from her heart.
Its like she's just saying to please
me.

I say it back, but in my mind i feel
an emptiness. I ask if she'll ever
leave her response is no, but i don't
think her heart is in it either. She
holds me and i feel at peace. But,
i feel a cold from the embrace and
shiver runs through me.

She asks me what's wrong, i said
I just felt a chill. I fall asleep
in her arms. Happy for the moment,
But, still i know its ephemeral.
Then, i awake in my own bed cold
and alone and the sadness overwhelms
me and i cry.

turtlenrs1's photo
Mon 04/02/07 04:44 PM
Thats really sad! sad But its good.

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/03/07 10:46 PM
Very Sad,,, Yet very well Written
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

no photo
Tue 04/03/07 10:50 PM
:heart: I'VE DONE THAT!!!! Great words for "MISSING"!!!

JUNNALYN's photo
Wed 05/30/07 07:33 PM
it was a sad story, just like struggling to screw all the memories...
but it was written with a good emotion and great soul to upholds with