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myanimalcracker · 2008-10-27T15:24:09-07:00

How can I write a poem when it will reveal my thinking each line a blushing declaration of what I need keep silent? How can I write a poem when somehow a word will render me just that much too naked too open to your eyesight? How can I write a poem when I am all to transparent? what was once my habit is now something I must fear. How can I write a poem that could determine feeling make me all too revealing? your eye might find me pathetic.

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myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 10/27/08 03:24 PM
How can I write a poem when it will reveal my thinking each line a blushing declaration of what I need keep silent? How can I write a poem when somehow a word will render me just that much too naked too open to your eyesight? How can I write a poem when I am all to transparent? what was once my habit is now something I must fear. How can I write a poem that could determine feeling make me all too revealing? your eye might find me pathetic.

lavos28 Joined Sat 10/27/07 Posts: 1196	Mon 10/27/08 03:24 PM
very nice!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 10/27/08 03:32 PM
goodjob

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 10/27/08 04:41 PM
((myanimalc)) what we see of you

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 10/27/08 06:54 PM Edited by Unknow on Mon 10/27/08 06:54 PM
but thats what makes your poems so good They're you

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 10/27/08 10:32 PM
Thank you lavos Mirror Harold Bill

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