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      i have took the time to write a little about how i feel and what i am lookin for id love to hear all your responses i think im in need of some critizisum right now including on my english....
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| i have took the time to write a little about how i feel and what i am lookin for id love to hear all your responses i think im in need of some critizisum right now including on my english.... try to use more periods and commas. *criticism. Leave the on out between including and my | |
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