Topic: 1 Eden St.
d4tc's photo
Sat 02/07/09 04:59 AM


People love
enjoy life
Living happy
Not to their fullest
because their fullest
would be foolish
expectations
to think someone
is completely satisfied
because one would lie
this fact out for all
to see and make fun of
that person as if they
stood up funny because
everyone wants to get a
laugh but no one wants
to be laughed at this
in part of life and
it's hypocritcal
visuals
rituals of insecurity
I am not sure
what I want
said about yesterdays
hate tomorrow
love right now
because now
is me
and yesterday
i learned what today
was for and know more about
what it takes to be happy
and it takes a whole
lot of things
that people forget
to remember
to be thankful for
furnishing each joy
happy people
love living
a life
to enjoy
feeling new
a new coat
fresh breathe
combed hair
clean clothes
and a little squirt of
come get me
in preperation
for a big night
where drinks toast
laughs cross
and kissing
tongues
feel best less slutty
on an intimate level
all mountains become
hills
crushed to rubble
One man says,
"Jill, your not going anywhere."
Jill,
"Oh dear Jack, your too kind,
I was beginning to fall
for you."


Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 02/07/09 06:20 AM
Very nice and interesting write.

LAMom's photo
Sat 02/07/09 09:22 AM



People love
enjoy life
Living happy
Not to their fullest
because their fullest
would be foolish
expectations
to think someone
is completely satisfied
because one would lie
this fact out for all
to see and make fun of
that person as if they
stood up funny because
everyone wants to get a
laugh but no one wants
to be laughed at this
in part of life and
it's hypocritcal
visuals
rituals of insecurity
I am not sure
what I want
said about yesterdays
hate tomorrow
love right now
because now
is me
and yesterday
i learned what today
was for and know more about
what it takes to be happy
and it takes a whole
lot of things
that people forget
to remember
to be thankful for
furnishing each joy
happy people
love living
a life
to enjoy
feeling new
a new coat
fresh breathe
combed hair
clean clothes
and a little squirt of
come get me
in preperation
for a big night
where drinks toast
laughs cross
and kissing
tongues
feel best less slutty
on an intimate level
all mountains become
hills
crushed to rubble
One man says,
"Jill, your not going anywhere."
Jill,
"Oh dear Jack, your too kind,
I was beginning to fall
for you."




You are simply Brilliant such a beautiful Soul are you flowers

no photo
Sat 02/07/09 12:00 PM
drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:
Nice job,,,I wish they had a dang Thumbs up little guy,,,lol
I feel like folks might think I drink all the time with the one I keep using,,,lol

tanyaann's photo
Sat 02/07/09 12:13 PM
I loved it! Great write! :smile:

jimz's photo
Sat 02/07/09 01:13 PM
cool breeze

d4tc's photo
Sun 02/08/09 11:53 AM
Edited by d4tc on Sun 02/08/09 11:55 AM

drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:
Nice job,,,I wish they had a dang Thumbs up little guy,,,lol
I feel like folks might think I drink all the time with the one I keep using,,,lol


Your wish is there command! lol! I found it. :thumbsup:

I know what your saying about the drinking guy. I feel the same way.



jimz, tanya, La Mom, faded
Thank You for all the replies.
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
and iam4u drinks LOL



Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 02/08/09 12:04 PM
Depends on which "Jack" she's falling for:

Liquid Genie

Genies, they say,
Live in bottles.

I become one
As I shoot into
The depths of emotional numbness.
Granting my wishes to say all I desire
Without care to your response
Be it laughter or ire.

Cowardly, you say?
Yup, I agree.

Perhaps there is a way to numb one’s give a ****
Without the speed or paybacks required of my amber friend, Jack.
Then again, Jack on his own does not exert such a hefty toll.
But oh heaven help me, when I stop paying attention
And let those sweet shots roll.

Jack is apparently a bit territorial
When it comes to sharing that numbing attraction.
I must truly be a one man wench
Even when numbing my excessive reaction.

Thump of perception
While muddling through this rant.

I’m a two-man wench
Without any flack.
One would be Marc,
The other, liquid Genie inducer,
named Gentleman Jack.

no photo
Sun 02/08/09 05:33 PM
drinker

d4tc's photo
Sun 02/08/09 07:19 PM
:tongue:

Depends on which "Jack" she's falling for:

Liquid Genie

Genies, they say,
Live in bottles.

I become one
As I shoot into
The depths of emotional numbness.
Granting my wishes to say all I desire
Without care to your response
Be it laughter or ire.

Cowardly, you say?
Yup, I agree.

Perhaps there is a way to numb one’s give a ****
Without the speed or paybacks required of my amber friend, Jack.
Then again, Jack on his own does not exert such a hefty toll.
But oh heaven help me, when I stop paying attention
And let those sweet shots roll.

Jack is apparently a bit territorial
When it comes to sharing that numbing attraction.
I must truly be a one man wench
Even when numbing my excessive reaction.

Thump of perception
While muddling through this rant.

I’m a two-man wench
Without any flack.
One would be Marc,
The other, liquid Genie inducer,
named Gentleman Jack.


Now that was AWESOME! :thumbsup: