Topic: well(you never reply)
forsaken_knight's photo
Tue 03/17/09 01:22 PM
I could try to spend the time to explaine when all i would be doing is in vain just why does a man have to entertain when his whole lifes a joke and a show where in the end he cruely gets old and lose's to the pain to me i see a women so fair but i wonder if the heart is to be seen or is it too deep an shallow and hidden kept below the sea's of lies hidden behind those beauitful eyes, so dont fret dont think me a biget just open you mouth and say what is there it makes life easyer even for those in dispair.

i wrote this as a message to someone after i got bored and started thinking about how manny people are even shallow on the net and i kinda find that funny and yet sad how people can judge when they dont and cant truly know you by just a pic.

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/17/09 04:41 PM

I could try to spend the time to explaine when all i would be doing is in vain just why does a man have to entertain when his whole lifes a joke and a show where in the end he cruely gets old and lose's to the pain to me i see a women so fair but i wonder if the heart is to be seen or is it too deep an shallow and hidden kept below the sea's of lies hidden behind those beauitful eyes, so dont fret dont think me a biget just open you mouth and say what is there it makes life easyer even for those in dispair.

i wrote this as a message to someone after i got bored and started thinking about how manny people are even shallow on the net and i kinda find that funny and yet sad how people can judge when they dont and cant truly know you by just a pic.

A Look

Look into my eyes
they are dimensional
speaking words
they are the usual

Judge me not
and say it's true
the heart you see
reflects some of you

On a hot wire
this feeble thread
future seems bleak
I see some dread

May I look
into your soul
to share your thoughts
you have been bold

Do not stop
Please keep on talking
the heart who reads this
might need help walking.

Raine Les 3/17/2009..
judgment casts a shadow, a sad commentary on love.


MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 03/17/09 04:42 PM


I could try to spend the time to explaine when all i would be doing is in vain just why does a man have to entertain when his whole lifes a joke and a show where in the end he cruely gets old and lose's to the pain to me i see a women so fair but i wonder if the heart is to be seen or is it too deep an shallow and hidden kept below the sea's of lies hidden behind those beauitful eyes, so dont fret dont think me a biget just open you mouth and say what is there it makes life easyer even for those in dispair.

i wrote this as a message to someone after i got bored and started thinking about how manny people are even shallow on the net and i kinda find that funny and yet sad how people can judge when they dont and cant truly know you by just a pic.

A Look

Look into my eyes
they are dimensional
speaking words
they are the usual

Judge me not
and say it's true
the heart you see
reflects some of you

On a hot wire
this feeble thread
future seems bleak
I see some dread

May I look
into your soul
to share your thoughts
you have been bold

Do not stop
Please keep on talking
the heart who reads this
might need help walking.

Raine Les 3/17/2009..
judgment casts a shadow, a sad commentary on love.


flowers

pkh's photo
Tue 03/17/09 06:45 PM
good write and welcome