Topic: slow-motion
rshizzle24's photo
Tue 03/24/09 11:26 AM
Slow motion
When first I saw you,
you moved in slow motion
Through my eyes, body,
and heart flowed emotion.
I always thought we would
never speak, but
My interest in you
has almost peaked.
Through the years,
we have made wonderful strides
Although it's almost time
for you to say good bye, but
Don't think of this as the end
In time, you will lend
me your hand
So you can walk down the
aisle with your tears
rushing like oceans
Then I can once again see
you walking in slow motion.


David Jones
Copyright ©2009 David Jones


rshizzle24's photo
Tue 03/24/09 12:54 PM
can people tell me what they think about it?

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 03/24/09 01:51 PM
Torn, I think, yeah torn is how I feel. Its sweet, but damn cold at the same time!