Topic: Please Daddy, Can't I Stay?
SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Wed 04/01/09 06:31 PM
Momma is twenty-one
Daddy twenty-three
The wedding was but six months before
now in a few months they'll be meeting me
Sometimes momma cries at night
Daddy paces nervously
He shouts about money they don't have
and the time being too soon
She tries to tell him there is a way
Daddy has none of it though
"Go to the doctor"
With that momma screamed at him to leave
Oh no they're yelling about me.
Daddy please don't be angry
I'll try not to be in the way
I won't cry much, not even if I'm hungry
You work hard to give momma what she has
And even if my shirt is a blanket,
It won't be all that bad.
Please don't send me to heaven yet
i don't want momma to be sad
Let me come and meet you both
and you'll see, it won't be so bad
Hold me daddy, just one time
Look into my unknowing baby eyes and see the days ahead.
Let me be your little boy, teach me to play ball
scold me when I'm naughty
Don't send me back to be with God
He sent me to be with you
Daddy I want you to love me
And someday when I'm all grown up
You and mommy will be proud. I promise
please...will you let me stay?

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 04/01/09 06:34 PM

Momma is twenty-one
Daddy twenty-three
The wedding was but six months before
now in a few months they'll be meeting me
Sometimes momma cries at night
Daddy paces nervously
He shouts about money they don't have
and the time being too soon
She tries to tell him there is a way
Daddy has none of it though
"Go to the doctor"
With that momma screamed at him to leave
Oh no they're yelling about me.
Daddy please don't be angry
I'll try not to be in the way
I won't cry much, not even if I'm hungry
You work hard to give momma what she has
And even if my shirt is a blanket,
It won't be all that bad.
Please don't send me to heaven yet
i don't want momma to be sad
Let me come and meet you both
and you'll see, it won't be so bad
Hold me daddy, just one time
Look into my unknowing baby eyes and see the days ahead.
Let me be your little boy, teach me to play ball
scold me when I'm naughty
Don't send me back to be with God
He sent me to be with you
Daddy I want you to love me
And someday when I'm all grown up
You and mommy will be proud. I promise
please...will you let me stay?
flowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Wed 04/01/09 07:01 PM
flowerforyou sad That is soooo sadflowerforyou sad

LAMom's photo
Thu 04/02/09 09:56 AM
:cry: flowerforyou :heart:
((( Nicki)))))

MzEm's photo
Thu 04/02/09 10:37 AM
Beautiful flow of words, very touching.