Topic: Add a Verse> collabaration<
mrniceguy40's photo
Mon 06/22/09 08:32 PM
Hope to get a collaborated effort on this write..lyrics? hmmmm Ill start the first four lines..feel free to quote and add a next verse.smokin

I am the saw
That made you an amputee
cutting through bone
Less you than there use to be


Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 06/22/09 08:46 PM
I am the knife
once stuck in your back.
What goes around, came,
now I'm under attack.

Italy0219's photo
Mon 06/22/09 08:51 PM
I am the word
you spoke so carelessly
now goes goes from person to person
and causes a monsterity

Italy0219's photo
Mon 06/22/09 08:52 PM
I think I spelled that wrong, monstrosity ??

Roco's photo
Mon 06/22/09 08:53 PM
kindred spirits we once were
but are no longer
I will crush you
I will disfigure you
I will maime you
until, you are, no longer

roko

Roco's photo
Mon 06/22/09 09:01 PM
As you cut me with your words
as you cut me with your gestures
I will become sharp
sharper than a razerblade
and I will cut through your soul.

roko

mrniceguy40's photo
Mon 06/22/09 09:13 PM

kindred spirits we once were
but are no longer
I will crush you
I will disfigure you
I will maime you
until, you are, no longer


This could be the chorus!!

mrniceguy40's photo
Mon 06/22/09 09:15 PM
Excellent contributes!!


Roco's photo
Mon 06/22/09 09:27 PM
Thanks for compliments man, use it, its yours.

Roko

RCraigVaught's photo
Tue 06/23/09 12:32 AM
Without a heart-a broken soul,
To live in doubt-my loves your toll,
I tear you down-to maintain my hold,
Your spirit crushed-your flesh is cold...

(Its on the fly, mr nice guy)

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 06/23/09 12:35 PM
"Disfigured" would be an interesting title.

d4tc's photo
Tue 06/23/09 01:15 PM
God made this man
a man only one

make me ten!
kill me nine!

call me greedy
save one life




I read this earlier with no reply.
I felt more inspired now. :tongue:


Great replies to all and thanks niceguy for
motivating our dark sides. Good topic starter drinker


Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 06/23/09 01:22 PM

God made this man
a man only one

make me ten!
kill me nine!

call me greedy
save one life




I read this earlier with no reply.
I felt more inspired now. :tongue:


Great replies to all and thanks niceguy for
motivating our dark sides. Good topic starter drinker


"call me greedy
save one life"
and let it be mine



(couldn't resist)

mrniceguy40's photo
Wed 06/24/09 08:32 AM

I am the knife
once stuck in your back.
What goes around, came,
now I'm under attack.


I Like this line...

I am the Knife
scarred you f**king face ( ...or) carved you a funny face
Stab you in the tounge
So my metal you can taste

(solo) ..lol

mrniceguy40's photo
Wed 06/24/09 08:37 AM

God made this man
a man only one

make me ten!
kill me nine!

call me greedy
save one life




I read this earlier with no reply.
I felt more inspired now. :tongue:


Great replies to all and thanks niceguy for
motivating our dark sides. Good topic starter drinker




Awesome lines from everyone! I am so inspired. BTW Good suggestion for the Title DKOW "dIsFiGuReD"...Love it..

Keep em comming!

no photo
Wed 06/24/09 11:55 AM
Its all under the bridge
As a hold your head wiggln feet and brused knees
water splashes, as i stab u
Just to make sure that i can still feel..