Topic: 365
d4tc's photo
Mon 07/06/09 03:36 PM

Winner Days
feel great

to spring
into

Summer Days
heat over means
We fall

in the rain
of blame

Lightening chains
thunder storms

a
Summer Days
sweat

pulls me In

pushes me When


the grounds seems
sound

it was

when I hit it

until it

is done with me

then

it does it again

The
lightening chains
weight

a frivilent minds
state

reaching up to
pull up this weight

to elevate

trudging over
that frvolous state

to rest in a better
place

where my toes trace
a safe lands
haven

craven
the darkness
of a ravens

days burned

into
nights

more concrete

than

sand

counting
the wrinkles
equally on
both hands

frivilled

not caring
about the barbeque sauce

I eat hot
ribs

s l o w

waking up to dead roosters
being pecked by crows

i know sanity

used to be my friend

befriended

pretended
words ended

Unmended

when

then
checks
than

then
than

wins

My shrink
thinks
I think too
beeeeeeeeee

I think too

d
e
e
e
e
e
p

when
I stare
into nothing

tie my shoes
to do the dew

untie my shoes

drinking a brew

Swimming with
my white coat
on

being weighed
down

DEEP

the frivelence
highly apparent

this orderly
needs

another white
coat

with more straps

bigger chains
tighter links

if i was a kid
unboyed
I'd have
yellow sheets


If I was a man
as I am

I'd say
the same
thing

nvkikigirl's photo
Mon 07/06/09 03:46 PM
Edited by nvkikigirl on Mon 07/06/09 03:46 PM
wow! great writing!!! :thumbsup: