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Topic: Sweetness
Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Thu 09/24/09 02:50 AM Edited by Sharris on Thu 09/24/09 02:51 AM
Sweetness Curl in my lap, Once and the more. I'll tell the old stories, Tis you, I adore. Watching your eyes, Fill with the wonder, Knowing you see, Our time together, tender. Rock me, my baby, In this moment. Soon you'll be gone. This world, you will grow it. Just for this breath in, We will hold on tight. Curl up for now, Until it is light. Raine Les 9/24/2009

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 09/24/09 03:04 AM
Beautiful

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 09/24/09 05:15 AM
Sweetness Curl in my lap, Once and the more. I'll tell the old stories, Tis you, I adore. Watching your eyes, Fill with the wonder, Knowing you see, Our time together, tender. Rock me, my baby, In this moment. Soon you'll be gone. This world, you will grow it. Just for this breath in, We will hold on tight. Curl up for now, Until it is light. Raine Les 9/24/2009 nice write

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Thu 09/24/09 08:36 AM
This is like a sugar-bomb Sharris , I really liked it.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 09/24/09 03:59 PM
Beautiful indeed

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Fri 09/25/09 06:32 AM
love it

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 09/25/09 07:25 AM
beautiful

HuckleberryFinn Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 753	Fri 09/25/09 08:17 AM Edited by HuckleberryFinn on Fri 09/25/09 08:17 AM
sweet, glad to see the "tis", loved its insertion, carried the poem and enhanced it immensely....Nice

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