Topic: When you were mine
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Thu 09/24/09 07:39 AM
What, tell me what are you feeling
As you lay there breathing
Breath... do memories keep
Flashing through your mind
I watch you...watch you
as you lay there breathing
Are you dreaming...am i dreaming
Cuz you're not there
You never were never here
I long to hear oh long to hear
Your steady breathing as you lay near
Once again just one more time
Our breathing in tume with time
Way back when.....
When you were mine

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Thu 09/24/09 07:51 AM
drinker flowerforyou

Fusion99's photo
Thu 09/24/09 08:31 AM

What, tell me what are you feeling
As you lay there breathing
Breath... do memories keep
Flashing through your mind
I watch you...watch you
as you lay there breathing
Are you dreaming...am i dreaming
Cuz you're not there
You never were never here
I long to hear oh long to hear
Your steady breathing as you lay near
Once again just one more time
Our breathing in tume with time
Way back when.....
When you were mine
Very nice write here, emotions portrayed gross and subtle.drinker drinker drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 09/24/09 04:00 PM
flowers

nvkikigirl's photo
Fri 09/25/09 07:41 PM
wonderful writing!!!drinker :thumbsup:

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Fri 09/25/09 08:32 PM
flowerforyou luv it...flowers