Topic: "Love's Last Night"
BYondLife's photo
Mon 10/19/09 06:41 PM
Kiss the skies
Swallowing the lies
Life is poetic
Just beyond genetic
With all of our parts and wires
Feeding the political liars
'Love begins with hope'
Climbing an upward slope
I'm aiming for your heart
Yet regrets tear us apart
Words are a weapon
With each passing second
Destructive force is breeding
No Godcan hear your pleading
Dying to the simple sound
As shadows creep through town
Be with her, hold her tight..
Tonight is love's last night.


bedlum1's photo
Mon 10/19/09 07:05 PM

Kiss the skies
Swallowing the lies
Life is poetic
Just beyond genetic
With all of our parts and wires
Feeding the political liars
'Love begins with hope'
Climbing an upward slope
I'm aiming for your heart
Yet regrets tear us apart
Words are a weapon
With each passing second
Destructive force is breeding
No Godcan hear your pleading
Dying to the simple sound
As shadows creep through town
Be with her, hold her tight..
Tonight is love's last night.


hope u feel better

BYondLife's photo
Mon 10/19/09 07:28 PM
..thanx.

nvkikigirl's photo
Mon 10/19/09 07:55 PM
nicely written. i like your writing style!!
drinker (oops) drinks biggrin

BYondLife's photo
Mon 10/19/09 08:04 PM

nicely written. i like your writing style!!
drinker (oops) drinks biggrin


Thanx. =]
You missed my other ones tho.
They were a lil while back now..
I'm glad you enjoy them as much as I do writing them.

no photo
Mon 10/19/09 09:25 PM
Excellent write Myke... :thumbsup:

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/20/09 04:52 PM

Excellent write Myke... :thumbsup:


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