Topic: Our Hidden Language.....
Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 12/10/09 05:33 PM
I feel your gaze
Burn deep
As I go about my usual biz
As the sun slowly sets
And you feel antsy

I see the thoughts
In your soft brown eyes
The longing for me
The wanting me

I smile at you
With my innocent
Yet lusty look
Which only makes you
More crazy
More filled with desire

I lick my lips
With the sunset
Letting you know what tonight
Will bring

And you smile
And I smile
Dancing in
Our hidden language





Tammy:heart:

cherie091279's photo
Thu 12/10/09 05:34 PM
Very nice..flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Thu 12/10/09 05:36 PM
flowerforyou

heavenlyboy34's photo
Thu 12/10/09 05:49 PM
nice imagery. However, you might try it without the colloquialisms (use more formal language) and see if that makes it more effective. flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 12/10/09 05:53 PM
Sorry beautiful boy

This is me

Me is this.......

Thanks though!!! Hugs and kisses!!!

Love
Tammy:heart: