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Topic: I'LL BE (song produced from my dream)
bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Mon 03/01/10 05:04 PM
there both good

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Mon 03/01/10 06:40 PM
steps of love maybe?

Sneaksintoyourheart Joined Fri 10/16/09 Posts: 19261	Mon 03/01/10 06:41 PM
steps of love maybe? that has a good sound but maybe if it was worded different

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Mon 03/01/10 06:56 PM
Very melodic!

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Mon 03/01/10 07:54 PM
Very nice poem. I still have all the poems you wrote me an gave to me

agrant333 Joined Thu 11/20/08 Posts: 1762	Mon 03/01/10 09:03 PM
TO BAD I DIDNT HAVE SOMEONE TO WRITE IT FOR its still good though...now to find a picking pattern on my guitar for it Great expressions you write,a soul needed a mate,one to fall back too... But who will catch you dragonfly?

agrant333 Joined Thu 11/20/08 Posts: 1762	Mon 03/01/10 09:08 PM
TO BAD I DIDNT HAVE SOMEONE TO WRITE IT FOR its still good though...now to find a picking pattern on my guitar for it Great expressions you write,a soul needed a mate,one to fall back too... But who will catch you dragonfly? Who shall whisper the flames i breathe upon they love,say now? For they need to See

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/02/10 03:32 PM
TO BAD I DIDNT HAVE SOMEONE TO WRITE IT FOR its still good though...now to find a picking pattern on my guitar for it Great expressions you write,a soul needed a mate,one to fall back too... But who will catch you dragonfly? Who shall whisper the flames i breathe upon they love,say now? For they need to See but most are blind

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/02/10 03:58 PM
Very melodic! i hope so ...im figuring out music for it

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