You want something romantic from me
but the words just don't come.
This world is just damn
cold and I feel like I wanna run.
Baby take my hand we
can get out of this place
where everyone's an
expert on the affairs
of the human race.
Everybody's got an answer
to questions that
haven't been asked.
They're out there saying
I'm wrong for you,
ain't no way our love will last.
Let's prove 'em wrong tonight
my love. Let's go to
Vegas and get hitched.
In that wedding chapel
we'll profess our love
and show the world that
it's full of shit.
There's better places
than this loser's town
we just gotta find 'em.
A place on a map to call home.
A place where we're free
to love and got lost
in each other's arms.
A place to let our passion roam.
Destiny is close enough
as the passenger seat
in my car. Baby come on!

goo poem

that was really good, and your saying i have talent????? lol

you let those thoughts just flow out like honey...

Damn u good

Althought, I do love poetry, this you wrote is not related to it.

Everyone's a critic these days.