Topic: I wish
David_Stuart's photo
Sun 10/08/06 12:11 PM
I wish


I wish I could be,
what you want to see.

I wish you could tell,
that I love you well.

I wish you could hear,
all these crying tears.

I wish you knew,
what I feel about you.

I wish you'll open your mind,
and let our mind intertwine.

I wish I could hold you,
when ever you feel blue.

I wish I could kiss you,
but im afraid to.

I wish I could try,
to not be shy.

I wish we could be together,
but you said friends forever.

I wish you could see,
we were ment to be.

David Scotty Stuart


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Tue 10/10/06 08:37 PM
Gosh, baby boy Who broke your heart? It's gonna be ok... really

Jimi366's photo
Tue 10/10/06 08:46 PM
Another good one.
Visit my creative writing site
at www.soulsgate.com
and feel free to post there anytime.
You have talent.
You capture emotion
and display it in words.

samantha198403's photo
Tue 10/10/06 11:08 PM
this is definately from the heart, cant wait to see more
samantha

tretia's photo
Wed 10/11/06 12:45 PM
its beautiful, david

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Thu 11/15/12 10:22 AM
Loved it!!my story relates to it.good writing.keep it up:)

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Thu 11/15/12 07:35 PM

Loved it!!my story relates to it.good writing.keep it up:)


Nice write smokin

It was originally posted by on Sun 10/08/06....drinker