Topic: Indescribible
no photo
Mon 11/01/10 10:45 AM
Edited by Nykolas on Mon 11/01/10 10:48 AM
Is this blind, or is it true,
all these thoughts she puts in you.

This rush of emotion hits unusual,
and her words, always unpredictable.

Possibilities, and weak knees,
But, honesty is always key.

Fears and pains may lie in wait,
thinking not, maybe this is fate.

Only time will tell whats on this path,
Is it strait, or will you crash?

Seeing her face brings on joy,
Finally sleeping at night, like when you were a boy.

Trials and challenges will be tough,
Yet with her, she likes it rough.

Hearing that angelic voice,
You drop to the ground without a choice.

Bad luck is better than none,
yet for once, it is gone.

On your feet and making it work,
and you can see her every quirk.

I write this now strait from the heart,
Hoping and praying that she's no shark.


(Inspiration from the woman I met through here)

-Nyko- 10/27/10/0454

bastet126's photo
Mon 11/01/10 12:26 PM
seems like you described it rather well, GL to you flowerforyou

fireflysgirl's photo
Mon 11/01/10 01:09 PM
agreed!

no photo
Mon 11/01/10 01:10 PM

agreed!

are you stalking me? lol

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/01/10 07:54 PM
Welcome
Nice writeflowerforyou

no photo
Mon 11/01/10 09:14 PM
ty check my other one on here "Tears of Blood"

no photo
Mon 11/01/10 09:54 PM
gosh, i am glad you have met someone so inspiring.

no photo
Tue 11/02/10 11:11 AM
Well thank you... It's been a long time since i had osmeone so inspiring though.