I'm in a little garage band, and I wrote these lyrics a couple of weeks ago, and well, my guys like the lyrics. But, what do YOU think?


When I open my eyes, I'm surrounded by darker days
If I fall back down, I realize they're no more ways
Doing things I couldn't do
You can't believe what I've been through
I feel I can take the rope off me
And sit back and let it be

And I feel I have a reason to live
To end the shame and sorrow
And I feel I have a reason to go on
Pick me up, and place me on my feet

When I lay back down, I'm trenched by horrible sights
If I get back up, I notice the longer nights
Hoping for better things to come
You won't believe where I'm from
And I feel I can step away from the ledge
Step back and realize

And I feel I have a reason to live
To end the shame and sorrow
And I feel I have a reason to go on
Pick me up, and place me on my feet

You've given me a reason
You've shown me a way to go on
You've proven that I'm wrong
You're the light I needed for the fire
You're the everything I've been looking for
You're the reason to live

And I feel I have a reason to live
To end the shame and sorrow
And I feel I have a reason to go on
Pick me up, and place me on my feet

Very good insight to love, life and living.Thank you

Wow!I loved it! I would like to hear the final though. Do you alwasy write your own things or do you accept them from others too?

I only write my own stuff...haha thanks guys. :)