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How does it look like,is it good enough, or i should do some amendment on it, thank u.
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Hello...i fink u definitely need to do a rework on it. Firstly, u've got to know what u really want...u seem to have mixed up ur reason 4 bein here. Other than that, i think u're gud!
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hey there , if I was looking i would want to see a little more of your personality in your writneg so i could imagine what you where like.
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Thank u all,i will make some changes now.
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